So actually i tried to potray like oneside of vedansh but it went wrong so guys dont be offended and i have changed the scene slightly ..you guys can check 11 chapter and i have provided ss to go with the flow...i hope the changed scene would be better and removed abusive part...
Vedansh's voice lowered, hurt seeping into it. "Then why didn't you tell me before going?"
"bava liste--"
He didn't wait for her to answer. His hand...his palm digging into the soft flesh of her waist, just above her hip, and squeezed lightly.
She sucked in a breath—a sharp, strangled HAAH!—arching her back, desperate to escape the pressure point that felt like a localized, burning fire.
"Didn't i say to stay away from him.. huh??" Vedansh hissed, his breath hot against her ear. "Tell me!"
"Bava, pls odulu," she said. "Noppoi ga undi..."
(Brother-in-law, please leave me. It hurts so much...)
Vedansh froze. His chest rose and fell heavily, his eyes flicking from her wound to her trembling lips. For a moment, guilt and rage warred in his expression. Then, without saying a word, he turned away.
"bava!" she called out, startled.
But he had already moved — his fists clenched tight, his jaw trembling. He punched the wall once. Then again. Again. Each blow harder than before, the dull thud echoing through the room. Blood splattered on the pale wall, running down in red streaks.
His breath came in sharp gasps, voice breaking with anger and hurt.
he rasped. "Even I was dying inside, Anu... when you went with him... every second burned me!"
He hit the wall again, knuckles torn now. The rage wasn't against her — it was against himself, against his helplessness.
Anu's heart sank. The pain in his voice shattered her completely. She rushed to him, grabbing his bleeding hand.
"Stop it, bava! Please, you're hurting yourself!"
But he didn't look at her. His eyes were glassy, lost.
"You don't know, Anu... what it did to me. Seeing you with him... it broke something inside."
Her eyes filled with tears. "Bava... please, look at me."
When he finally did, the anger melted, replaced by the raw ache of love and guilt. His hand trembled in hers, blood smearing on her wrist.
She stepped closer and wrapped her arms around him tightly.
Vedansh stiffened for a second — then all his resistance broke. He held her back, his forehead pressing against her shoulder, breath shuddering.
The wall behind them still bore the marks of his pain — crimson fingerprints of love twisted with agony — but in that fragile hug, something inside both of them began to heal.
so above is the changed scene ....
Anu hurried back with the first-aid box, her hands trembling as she saw the blood still dripping from Vedansh's knuckles. The marks on the wall stood like silent witnesses to his pain.
She sat beside him, carefully opening the ointment tube. "Bava, give me your hand... please, let me apply this."
Vedansh didn't respond. He just stared at the floor, breathing unevenly. When she tried to take his hand, he suddenly pulled it back, his jaw tight.
Before she could say anything, he sat down on the floor in front of her and gently pulled her closer — placing her legs on his lap. His movements were desperate yet tender, like he needed her presence to breathe.
"Vedansh...?" she whispered, startled.
Without a word, he bent down and pressed his forehead against her stomach. His arms wrapped around her waist, his fingers gripping the fabric of her kurta. The heat of his breath made her heart twist painfully.
She felt a faint dampness where his face was buried. Her lips quivered.
"Bava... are you crying...?" she asked softly, her voice trembling.
No reply. Only a deeper shudder from him. When she tried to lift his head, he resisted, holding her tighter, nuzzling into her stomach like a child seeking shelter.
Tears welled up in her eyes. She gently ran her fingers through his hair, caressing his head in slow, soothing strokes. Her heart ached at the brokenness in his silence.
He didn't stop pressing her feet — his thumbs moving rhythmically, as if trying to ease a pain he himself couldn't heal. His tears kept falling, tracing lines down his cheeks, soaking into her dress.
"Bava... please, let me apply medicine. Your hand's bleeding."
But instead of answering, and pressed a kiss where moments ago he had pinched lightly. Another kiss followed — slower, trembling — and then another, each one soaked in unspoken apology and love.
Anu's tears slipped silently down her cheeks. She didn't stop him. Her fingers tangled gently in his hair, whispering through her touch everything she couldn't say aloud — her pain, her forgiveness, her love.
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Nidhi walked into Rahul's room, only to find him once again buried in work — phone at his ear, laptop open, papers scattered.
She stood at the door with her arms folded, watching him finish his call. The moment he cut it, he started scrolling through his emails.
"Seriously?" she groaned.
Rahul didn't even look up. "Just five minutes, Nidhi. I need to reply to this —"
Before he could finish, Nidhi swiftly snatched the phone from his hand and darted away.
"Bava! We came on holiday to relax!" she shouted, laughing as she ran. "Why are you working even here?"
"Nidhi!" Rahul yelled, half-amused, half-exasperated, getting up to chase her. "Stop right there!"
She giggled and turned just in time to see him sprinting after her. Her laughter filled the entire room as she dodged him, running around the bed.
"Nidhi, give it back!" he said, trying not to laugh himself.
"No way! You'll only open your mails again!" she teased, waving the phone high.
In her rush to turn, her foot slipped on the edge of the rug and she lost balance, falling backward onto the bed clutching rahul shirt so he was on top of her..both were panting their lips were so close if any one moves they end up kissing.....
Nidhi pulled him and kissed him and he was utterly shocked...both chest were pressing and she was sucking his upper lip but next second he got up
"Nidhi..." Rahul whispered, his voice hoarse. "This is wrong."
Her smile faded instantly. "Wrong? Why?"
He sat up quickly, running a hand through his hair. "You're just—" he stopped mid-sentence, trying to calm his tone. "You're just confused, Nidhi. You don't understand what you're feeling."
She sat up too, clutching the bedsheet. "No, bava... I do understand. I've been trying to ignore it, but I can't anymore. Every time you talk, every time you smile at me, I just—" her voice cracked, "I feel something I've never felt before."
"Nidhi..." he said softly, "you're young. You think this is love because it feels new and exciting. But love... it's not like this. You'll realize it someday."
Tears welled up in her eyes. "So what I feel is nothing to you?"
He looked away, pained. "It's not nothing. But it's not right either."
She shook her head, voice trembling. "Without giving a chance how can you say it's not right."
Rahul froze at her words. He wanted to deny it, but her teary eyes mirrored something he had buried long ago — loneliness.
He sighed heavily, voice barely a whisper. "Nidhi... you don't deserve to be with someone like me. You deserve better"
Tears rolled down her cheeks. "And i want you. I dont want anything better. wait do u-u love som- someone?" she shuttered.
Silence stretched between them — raw and aching. Rahul wanted to scream and say no but he didn't..wantedly.
Rahul stood up slowly, turning away, his fists clenched. "Please, Nidhi... don't make this harder."
She closed her eyes, whispering through her tears, "Too late. It already is. Wish you a happy life with your loved one Mr. Rahul Devreddy."
She paused for a long moment before walking out of the room — leaving him on the bed, holding onto the warmth that still lingered where she had been..
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Morning sunlight slipped through the thin curtains, spreading a soft golden glow across the room. The chaos of the night had melted into silence.
Anu stirred slightly, feeling a gentle weight against her. She looked — Vedansh was fast asleep, his face buried in the curve of her neck. His breath was warm against her skin, steady and peaceful, like a child who had finally found calm after a storm.
A faint smile curved her lips. The same man who had shattered in her arms just hours ago now looked so innocent, so vulnerable. His fingers were loosely curled around the edge of her dupatta, as if afraid she might disappear in his sleep.
She couldn't help but chuckle softly, brushing a strand of hair away from his forehead. "Bava..." she whispered, her voice barely a breath.
He mumbled something incoherent and snuggled closer, his nose brushing against her neck, making her heart flutter. Anu's smile deepened. She leaned down and placed a tender kiss on his temple, her lips lingering there for a moment — a silent promise, a quiet apology, a small prayer that he'd never have to cry like that again.
Her fingers gently traced the faint bandage she had wrapped around his hand the night before. Seeing him like that — peaceful, vulnerable, safe — filled her chest with warmth.
She whispered softly, "Sleep well, my angry baby..." and held him a little tighter, her eyes glistening as morning light painted their embrace in gold.
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The house was quiet. Rahul hadn't slept properly — her words kept echoing in his head. "I started falling for you Bava."
He sighed and got ready, carrying a small bag filled with her favorite chocolates and pastries from the bakery down the street. Maybe it wasn't much, but he just wanted to see her smile again.
When he reached her room, the door was half-open. Nidhi sat by the window, hugging her knees, staring outside. Her eyes were swollen from crying, her hair a little messy, but she looked heartbreakingly beautiful in the soft morning light.
Rahul knocked gently. "Hey..."
She didn't turn.
He smiled awkwardly, stepping inside. "Look what I got." He opened the bag and showed her the chocolates and a small cake box. "You love these, right? Come on, Nidhi... whatever happened yesterday, let's just forget it and move on, okay?"
That one sentence broke something inside her.
She turned slowly, eyes blazing through the tears. In one swift motion, she snatched the bag from his hand and threw it onto the floor — chocolates, wrappers, boxes all scattered around.
Rahul froze.
"I don't want anything!" she yelled, her voice shaking. "And don't you dare tell me what to do!"
He blinked, taken aback. "Nidhi—"
"Did I force you to love me?" she said, stepping closer, her tears now spilling freely. "Ledu kada? (No right?)Then who are you to tell me to forget?"
Her voice cracked, raw with pain. "You don't get to walk in here with chocolates and act like nothing happened. You broke something inside me that I didn't even know existed."
Rahul stood speechless, guilt written all over his face. He'd never seen her like this — not angry, not crying, but shattered.
For a moment, the only sound was her trembling breath. Then she brushed past him and walked out, leaving behind the scattered chocolates — and a silence that felt heavier than words.
Rahul stood there, stunned, staring at the mess on the floor. His heart clenched as he whispered to himself,
"Maybe she's right... maybe I was the coward. But Nidhi you deserve better.. I have anger issues..i don't want to hurt you unecessarily..and we also have a quite age gap.. i don't want you to feel in future like bounded...its just infactuation you will forget me eventually.."
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